celestlian

3.5K?! OMG thank you to everyone who gave Dear Dahlia a chance <3

RoseyBooks

Hiii! Your stories look so interesting! And your pfp background reminds me of this art style from this video game I played when I was kid haha. Anyways, I'm new to wattpad and I'm trying to connect with other reader/writers on here and I was wondering if you could read the chapter I posted on my story, King of Sands? I'd love some feedback/tips on it, if you have the time ofc 

RoseyBooks

@celestlian Yes, the tales and Sheba's story will get told a lot. I actually shortened that chapter because I didn't want to reveal too much and leave the reader with questions to keep them reading
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celestlian

@RoseyBooks no worries, and thank you sm, glad you like my art :) as for the chapter I think it is good! The backstory is well laid out. I think maybe talk a bit more about what kind of tales Sheba tells Dinraal...like if she has a favourite one and such? I think that would ground her even more.
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