celtic9216

I made a few revisions after someone pointed out a few things I needed to address. I hope ya'll enjoy it. https://www.wattpad.com/story/160218723

tallulah2447

I see you posted a message saying you have done alot of editing. Well done! I don't particularly enjoy it either as I have to reread my initial draft (which always sucks). Maybe have a shot beforehand : )
          
          All the best. I am looking forward to seeing where the next chapter goes.
          Kind regards xox

GirlsDeadMonsterxx

Cannot wait to give your stories a try! :) 
          I hope you enjoy your day further hey 

GirlsDeadMonsterxx

@GirlsDeadMonsterxx I'll definitely vote don't worry
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GirlsDeadMonsterxx

@GirlsDeadMonsterxx if i could give your description a vote, believe me, i would've already :) 
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celtic9216

@GirlsDeadMonsterxx Count on it. If you like what you read consider leaving a comment or giving a vote. I would very much appreciate it.
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tallulah2447

Oh this is lovely ; I read your updated blurb, and can happily say it's made leaps and bounds in capturing the imagination. I love the last paragraph! Excellent work. 
          
          Furthermore, thank you for making use of my cover design. You are most welcome to discard it and seek more professional individuals on the Wattpad community. However- it is a nice gesture that you have made use of it. 
          
          All the best, and I'll be on the lookout for your works xox
          
          Kind regards

celtic9216

@tallulah2447 I wouldn't dream of discarding the cover you made for me. I simply love it too much.
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tallulah2447

Thank you for your generous words. Everyone's criticism has weight for each person has a unique perspective that can be followed up on to improve our works, so if you do - I'll need your wise words. I shall have a look at your own creative pieces and provide a review too. Be on the look out for it within a few days (I am only too happy to provide support to fellow writers) xox 
          
          Kind regards

tallulah2447

Thank you for your time to look into my novel, and add a little vote. Should you wish to share, I would love to know what you think: any critiques of suggestions are most welcome xox
          Kind regards 

celtic9216

@tallulah2447 I don't know if my criticism carries enough weight to be of any value. I have read some of your novel already, and all I can say is it keeps me interested. That in itself is something substantial in my honest opinion. One of the hardest things for a writer to accomplish is holding onto a readers interest, in that, I feel like you have succeeded. Perhaps I could interest you in glancing over one of my works? I would very much appreciate someone with your success taking the time to review work, and I feel like your input would be most valuable.
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