@tallulah2447 I don't know if my criticism carries enough weight to be of any value. I have read some of your novel already, and all I can say is it keeps me interested. That in itself is something substantial in my honest opinion. One of the hardest things for a writer to accomplish is holding onto a readers interest, in that, I feel like you have succeeded. Perhaps I could interest you in glancing over one of my works? I would very much appreciate someone with your success taking the time to review work, and I feel like your input would be most valuable.