celticQueen92

@CameoLeaness @CameoLeaness well let me just first start of by saying that your story execution was flawless! I actually started and finished your book in 24 hours.... That usually never happens for me, I'm always busy, but I just COULD NOT put Caden and Deidre down for nothing! XD
          As for constructive criticism, I would just point out that after the first time they attempted to abduct her from the balcony, the second and third time almost felt redundant. It was as though the reader began to question the King's intelligence, because it was never even addressed take further precautionary countermeasures to avoid such an assault in the future, and then it just kept happening. And although it was enjoyable to read Deirdre's struggles and triumphs throughout, I just wish "Devon" would have been more cunning than that. Lastly, it was very confusing when Caden was revealed to be a rebel..... Because, didn't he thwart the rebellions plans like several times, and make kills doing so....? He could have handed over at literally any point, but he didn't, which begs the question, how is it that Caden and Devon are on good terms? Seems like Caden made Devon's job much harder.
          But anyway, that's all of my observations! Thanks again for such an enjoyable read last night, and one more thing, your character development is sooooo on point! #applause