ch0c0halic

This is a twisted, funny, and fantastic look at a dystopian future where the AI's have the porn laden Internet as its sub-consious?!? What a concept! The little touches of "Click here to like on Facebook." with no way to click is a joke that comes back to haunt you throughout the story. Shows how really messed up an AI would be.

Whiskeyqueenn

Thank you for voting on Bessa

Whiskeyqueenn

All this was so awesome to read
            
            And I can’t wait for you to read the rest
            
            Have a great day
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ch0c0halic

@Whiskeyqueenn 
            I can really sympathize with her plight. Her mate should have known better, especially since his father warned him. All the things she expected to do for the first time with her mate have been taken from her in a very public and (I think) humiliating manner. He deserves everything she puts him through and a lot more. I feel bad for her that she has to go through the pain in order to show him (the insensitive lout) how really badly he messed up.
            
            I cheered when she stuck him with the scissors. And when she sliced those bitches throats.
            
            She's becoming a strong LUNA. It's just very painful to see how it's happening.
            
            I'm torn, should she eventually forgive him or suffer forever the agony of his lost love. She is hurting herself as much as him by not forgiving him. And she's denying herself a future. It's so real because I've seen people do exactly the same thing.
            
            I guess I'd like to see both of them have a crisis of conscience.
            Him finally seeing how badly he messed up and somehow try to atone for his behavior. 
            Her having an epiphany of understanding what she's doing to both him and herself. Then making a conscious decision to either accept or reject him.
            
            Can't wait to see what you decide to do with them.
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TonyHarmsworth

Hi Jimmy,
          
          You read THE VISITOR very quickly so assume it appealed.
          
          My other books are MINDSLIP which is somewhat more bizarre in that a supernova causes all creatures on Earth to swap minds. It follows a particular family as they try to work their way through the chaos. https://www.wattpad.com/417242952-mindslip-introduction
          
          and GREEN DOOR, which is now in second draft. A man walking his dog accidentally starts an adventure which saves humanity. https://www.wattpad.com/394339766-green-door-introduction
          
          Hope you enjoy them.
          
          Tony

The3dreamers

Hi Jimmy,
          
          Thanks for checking out The Dream Weaver. Thanks for the votes.  :)
          
          Happy Wattpadding,
          
          Amber

The3dreamers

Woo, you read the whole book already? You're a fast reader for sure. If I could give you a gold star back for being such a great supporter, you'd get one!
            
            Thanks for all the votes. LOVE that :)
            
            Cheers,
            
            Amber
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