chamdreixx

Finally published a new Kabanata :)
          	Comment here your thoughts about this Trilogy, let's see where your imaginative foreshadowing will take us. 
          	I just published "Kabanata 27" of my story "Fill My Naked Empty Space | Book 2". https://www.wattpad.com/1211271542?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=chamdreixx&wp_originator=bmQ%2BHfV9Cvp9lWDnzbO8%2BhfKwi%2FF5vRM%2FpQ62pKjc%2BX0ptwmACwh%2Ff6ZR820VpPSoXBtikIU32Io%2BWKHjlRVTNtnuLY%2Bhq9%2FrcD6EsiWmU%2FingaPCbWJCVLRNnIR%2Bh4z

mpress127

I've read the story's 3 chapters and it's a disaster. Ang gulo, revise it and make it more comprehensive. Sobrang daming characters na di masyadong napakilala. You should've slowed down a bit. Ang pangit ng story. And mayaman sila right? Bakit asal kalye yung ibang characters? (NAKED FALL)

wei_rd

hi author, I haven't finished reading book 2 of naked fall but it's already bugging me  I want neil and kaizer back po please  I really like the plot of the story but kinakabahan lang po ako sa ending

Vkthss

 i think they will end up together. Neil and kaizer but with rhad since the tags has mxmxm maybe not on the second book but in the last book
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Yokaiyle513

Sana may update an po
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wei_rd

@wei_rd hala nawala yung emojis :<
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