Hello!
I apologize in advance if this comment seems strange, but don't take it as a negative: it's simply due to my habit of keeping a physical record of the stories I read and the comments related to them.
That said, you've edited your story three times, but I think it's always been very good. I like your style, so I'll always be rooting for you.
Thank you for your hard work, and I'm sorry if I may have offended you.