ChaosSin_Deity

I've managed to upload my Dxd Story I hope you like it

ChaosSin_Deity

@chance11502 great I'm happy to hear it 
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chance11502

I’ll read it after work, and I’ll try to give some attention to it if I like it
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ChaosSin_Deity

I've almost finished the prologue 

ChaosSin_Deity

@chance11502 that's fine with me is it alr if you could spread the book in anyway it would help a lot 
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chance11502

@ChaosSin_Deity I'll be leaving for work soon so if you finish and decide to release today, I may not be able to read it right away.
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ChaosSin_Deity

@chance11502 yeah fingers crossed but it will be done by today 
            
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ChaosSin_Deity

I will be making my own Dxd book it would mean a lot if you could check it out

ChaosSin_Deity

@chance11502 thank you I'm looking forward to your comments.
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chance11502

@ChaosSin_Deity Well, let me know when it comes out and best of luck to you and your story, happy writing! 
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ChaosSin_Deity

@chance11502 yeah but I'm gonna try and have fun writing this story I've currently finished the prep work and I'm now currently going into writing it
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RIMU_chi

Hay i want tk talk about the fanfic 
          
          
          how should i start the chapter ? 

chance11502

I forgot one thing important, Ophis is technically the leader of an enemy faction called the Khaos Brigade, which consists of many powerful people whose supposed goal is to defeat or kill Great Red however most of the people in this faction mostly just use the power she casually gives them to further their own usually malicious goals. 
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chance11502

After all this, Rimuru asks for their help in guiding him through DXD, Great Red is more conservative about it and is more content with staying in the Dimension Gap, however Ophis jumps at the chance to ally with Rimuru both out of genuine curiosity and a veiled attempt to finally get Great Red out of her home (but over time in the series I’d like to see her view staying with Rimuru more pleasurable than being in the DG), Rimuru then asks Ciel to take him to the most interesting place in DXD which would of course be Kuoh Academy. There he enrolls as a male student and soon after, he witnesses the incident with Raynare and Issei happen and Rias saving him, he gets concerned over what happened and the next day after that all happened he decides to stroll right up to the ORC with Ophis in tow and demands an explanation for what he saw. That’s about all I can think of as a starting point but I trust you’ll make this FF a satisfying read (also in terms of shipping and romance idc if he has a Harem or not but I’d like to at least see him with Ophis and/or Akeno Himejima).
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chance11502

Before he talks to them, he sees them fighting (Ophis wants Great Red out of the Dimensional Gap bc she views it as her home and he’s intruding) but in the middle of their fight, they see Rimuru, They start talking to him (btw Great Red is a guy and Ophis is technically a girl) and find out who he is and where he’s from (you can decide just what all Rimuru tells them). After this talk they find him interesting (especially Ophis) and decide to fight him, however to their surprise, he basically just plays with them and bodies them while acting all innocent like “I’m sorry for not going all out, I didn’t want to kill you guys” or something like that. This of course greatly interests them as basically no other beings in that world could even hope to challenge them even all together.
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Void_Rimuru

If you don't want him to be Rais servent then don't make him Issei brother. Him being Ajuka Beelzebub Little Brother make him equal to Rais also he can be Astaroth clan heir too. 

chance11502

Well if the Author goes with what I told them, he won’t be Issei’s brother, but he won’t be born a high class devil either… we shall see. 
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