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Any new story you are going to publish ?

pavandarak

@chandini3110 thanks author, Ya take your time.We know once you are in flow you don't make the readers for long
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chandini3110

Am kind busy with some work will start the writing again once I get free … thank you for your interest and patience
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sweething69

Hi Sunshine, I really enjoyed the story ....“Gamble for a New Life”....
          It really touched my heart    ...But you need one more chapter.  Kavya really need to fix the Bad Karma the she created....out of hate, wanting to win so bad...she destroyed contestant   # 16 , quiet girl from Gujarat life with ….Implant: DD, round, over muscle,
          making her a freak.  That was  did not right and Kavya knew better.  Kavya need to go find her # 16 girl,  ....and make this right...and ask for forgiveness.   Kavya forgave Vijay for what he did to Kavya family. …...this is no different.

sweething69

Hi Sunshine...I think I have figured a way to solve the problem and tie it back into the story....an easy out..... Your whole story “Gamble for a New Life” was based on a 
            “honer”.. to his/her to protect and save the family, home and farm.  For several writers on here, at their request when they are stumped. I share key points idea. The writers pick  which key points they like and build around them. So here for you, keep and use what you desire,      ….Karma...  (P1) While kavya and arjun are sitting under her favorite neem tree watching her daughter play. Her mind drifts back in time to the time when she came home and vijay was begging her for forgiveness and paying the family back trying to restore good karma for what he had done. (P2) this brought back the guilt for what she had to the poor quite girl #16 when she had requested DD implants round on top of mussel for her.  The hora and sever pain that she had inflected on her, destroying her life making her a freak. (P3) feeling guilty and depressed kavya approach arjun, asking for his help.   Kavya is needing to make thing right the quite girl #16... restore “good karma” before her wedding. To do what ever it takes to make this right, including doing some about the implant, what ever the girl need.  Kavya has some money now to make it happen. (P4) being arjun is a surgin, they give proper implants (P5) kavya  and arjun  help her move closer to some of her family who love and accept her. And the girl forgives kavya and wishes her blessing in her life. (P6) while kavya reflecting back to that time, kavya shares a letter with arjun that she had received earlier in the day form #16 girl. She has meet some one and it truly happy and is about to get marry.  She want to thank kkavya and arjun for saving her life from the bottom of her heart.  ...arrange this how ever you heart desires....please over look the creative spelling and grammer....my gift to you....tahsa..
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chandini3110

Hmm never thought in that angle
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Tanishakhan999

Hii chandani, I am your big fan and I like almost all your stories but there also some my priorities and according to that I like if you create a story which contains this things : lesbian love , Goth, piercing, tattoos etc so please this is a small request

chandini3110

Thanks will keep that in mind for future projects
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hamalhel

I have read almost all your stories and I have enjoyed the scenery in your stories. I am Finnish and will never be able to comprehend India, such a vast country. Your writing style is rousing. You have a wonderful command on English, better than mine. The persons in your stories are real and colourful, the text plentiful, full of details nourishing my imagination.
          
          Your text has been healing, because on my path to full womanhood there have been enough contradictions and things that have been painful and difficult, and I have not been able to talk about them. Now I reflect on them.
          
           I beg you, please continue your good work. I love your soul.

chandini3110

Thanks for your wonderful words
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