chanteleylace
We have finally gotten to the victim, Mr. Mullins side of things. Do you trust his testimony? Are you enjoying the way things are set up. Are there things that you love/hate about the story so far?
chanteleylace
chanteleylace
The first chapter of The Verdict is meant to be an introduction to the way that a Jury is formed ,and the introduction to the man character 1549. I have been debating whether I should give her a name or keep it anonymous. Should there be a character list ?
TheRecklessRebel
I wasn't sure if you fancied horror or not but if you are interested in the genre and don't mind checking out stories, my link below, thanks!
https://www.wattpad.com/story/90518382-butcher-boy-tnthorrorcontest?utm_source=referral&utm_medium=top100&utm_campaign=turner&nofs=1
chanteleylace
@TheRecklessRebel Thanks for checking my stories out,i really appreciate it.Thanks for the feedback and ideas for improvement :)
chanteleylace
@TheRecklessRebel Of course I don't expect you to read the stories at 2 am.lol. My collection of stories to keep you up at night is the one that I would like you to check out whenever you get timeim looking for tips that will help improve my stories,i was never great at writing long stories so I stick to ones that aren't very long.
TheRecklessRebel
Thanks and I will! It's 2am right now so I totally will later — do you have any certain titles in mind?