HELLOU, I can try and explain it a bit. Basically, to make your stories more descriptive, focus on small, clear details instead of trying to sound fancy. Think about what your character can see, hear, smell, or feel, and add one of those to the scene. Be specific and avoid vague words. Show feelings through actions, like body movement or reactions, instead of saying the feeling directly. When something important happens, focus on one small detail to set the mood. Use simple comparisons to things people know in real life. Cut words like “very” or “really” and explain what makes something feel that way. Also try reading your writing out loud it really helps you notice weak parts and fix some things that maybe don’t actually make sense as it seemed!
