A httyd writer guy

Can you please read my fan fiction and tell me what you think about it
          
          Please, you wouldn't mean a lot to me.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/361160604?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=kyuubi34

Hello I have just started writing a Is dragon the nine realms fan fiction.
          
          I was wondering can you please read it and give me your feedback on it.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/366778985?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=justingame44