Hello Charlie/Charlotte (whatever you prefer), I have searched your second account and was thoroughly enjoying your Hermione fanfiction, although I came across a major error in the plot. Believe me, I know it isn't entirely based on the Harry Potter series as it is unreal, however Luna Lovegood is in the year below The Golden Trio along with Ginny Weasley and other characters. This made me irritated and I couldn't any longer read your detailed and extremely great book. Please carry on with it and exclude the incident with Luna. Please take into consideration other people's views though, I do not want to discriminate their opinions as it would be unfair.
Yours sincerely,
YOUR SISTER #shrekt
