Larrisa Antonette

Yup I don't read the whole story bt I do undrstand the flow n there's a various story fillers in ur story author. 

@charlielangmalakas its 'staring' not starring famous actors (?) I'm not staring wit ur books author, bcs first of all ur story is not interesting at all, dont u fel grtaful bcz im givin u tips to improve ur story coz itz obvious dat ur a new writer take it as a feedbk to imprve ur story.

You'll see how changed she is once you've finished reading all of it. My story is not the problem. How about you starring in my new book? Eh? 

@Erraldddd going to add it in my Lib, author