I have officially deleted the first version of His List (yes, my poor baby is now circling the Internet drain). I really loved writing it, but it was only when I went back to edit that I realised that there were a lot of parts that were unnecessary or didn't make sense, and so many characters that I don't feel should have been there.
I have started uploading the rewritten version of His List - which I love a lot more now because I'm really putting effort into it and editing before I post so it's not as higgledy pickledy as the first version - and there are a lot of changes.
Many characters have been deleted:
Carl Jones
Jordan Courtney
Archie (the college guy)
Vanessa Cob (ahh I didn't want to delete her, but it was either her or Mr Lincoln)
Rico (he hasn't been deleted but he is now Finlay)
Also, there is no official cast list, I'm just describing the characters how I imagine them, and you guys are free to think up whatever image of them you want :)
Wow this is a long status update, but whatever.
Have a great day :)
(Oo, and the story takes place in Oklahoma, in a made up town called Swallow Rock)