@Undecidable Hi! God, you have me the biggest fright because it only loaded the "Hey, I just wanted to let you know..." At first and I was like "crap, what have I done" hahahaha. Sorry, me rambling on. So, do you want to do this via private message? It's just easier than doing it on my message board. Seriously, when I saw the rest of the message I was so happy. I'm really so glad that you've been enjoying my mystery thrillers, I've found it really hard to keep my current one as a teen fiction story (but I think in the end I'll add a twist of mystery/thriller) anyway, so to personal message me there's a thing near the top of my message board that should say 'send a message' click on that and I can give you some tips. Thanks so much, you've really brightened my day :D I hope you have a brilliant day too (today is my last day of holidays so I am treasuring it). Xx