GOODAESThETICVIBES

Hello! 
          
          I read your story, and I like it so far! The only thing that I'm not a fan of, is that you put what's happening in the anime word for word. I think it would be better if you summarize what the characters are saying instead of putting it word for word. Other than that, I like it! 
          
          Also, I'm so sorry if that came off as rude, please forgive me if it did. 

chaseatlanticrahhh

It’s fine. Sorry I responded late this time lmao I had a swim meet
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GOODAESThETICVIBES

@NamjoonsDimplesTwT Of course! Sorry for the late reply, I didn't get a notification that you responded. 
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chaseatlanticrahhh

No no, actually that was very helpful I’ll keep that in mind. I’ll start to summarize what the characters are saying instead. I got the idea that the character quotes were getting too long but I just went with it. Thanks for reading what I had! <3
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anniesonlybae

Hey shawty 

chaseatlanticrahhh

I- my school starts at 8 bc we’re doing distance learning.
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