oh-the-joys-of-life

I have some tips for you? I strongly  suggest that you write your stories in paragraphs, not returning every sentence like you do now. Also, don't number things in your stories, like, "1:, 2:, 3:." That's a no no. Instead, you should do something like this: "Firstly… following that… and lastly…" Okay? :) I love the rest of POWERS. You're doing a great job. ^^