I've read the story. I think the story is ok. it's just the cover. you should make it more attractive.
like on the cover that there should be your oc with Takao and Akashi. I mean, this story is about Takao and Akashi and your OC right? The more attractive your cover, the more readers are curious and read the story.
Uhmm... I'm not really good at giving opinion. But I'm telling you the truth. Cause to be honest, I got many view cause of my cover.
Sorry if it's not helping you *bow*