thatonebitch

https://www.wattpad.com/story/396138057?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=cherryperriezzz 

Ok

@Sinlks I don't believe I've read it. I think I just have it in my My library

The Villain’s apprentice 

oops just realized you didnt have a book on your profile. if you dont mind id really appreciate it if you checked my book out and let me know your thoughts on it!!

there's only one story on my profile rn!! just that one. what book of yours do you want me to read?

@https_atwd  what should be R4R

@chayannemoon Thank you for your response. I'm glad you liked it. Actually, you're not the only person who thinks I should expand the story. Even my husband wants me to turn it into a full novel. I won't rule it out. Maybe after I've finished my current series (Fire and Magic). I am currently releasing 1 chapter per week and just released Chapter 69 yesterday.
            Also, I have parts of my other sci-fi stories on here if you're interested. Just the first few chapters so that if you like them, you can buy the books or read them on my Ream site.
            Thanks again.

@SueMcKenzieAuthor Of course I would love to tell you my thoughts on your story, "The Alien". I would just like to say the plot overall wonderful, love it, storyline good, perfect, wonderful, love it. Ten out of ten on the reading. The only thing that disappointed me when I read your story "The Alien" was that it was only seven chapters, but at the same time it was a good enough read to be that seven chapters. But also because it was such a good read, I felt like there could have been more, way more for the book if you wanted to add more to it. I feel like some readers would greatly appreciate it. I know for one I'd probably like you to have like a whole story for that, like maybe twenty plus chapters, but obviously I'm not going to force you because that's rude. But it'd be nice if there was a story for "The Alien"  to see what happened afterwards.