Victoriarene17

Hey there! I hope im not bothering you but could you please check out my new book 'The boy in the Tree' and maybe your thoughts on it? Thanks:)
          -Tori
          btw. I LOVE selena gomez<3

cheepa_

I think it's a really interesting plotline and you write pretty good!  A thing you could work on is showing not telling, and I know teachers say this all the time but I even struggle with it still and I've been writing my whole life! But try more metaphors, more details, and instead of saying "this happened" go back to that scene and write about it
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