Please I need some more people, who are willing to give feedback, to read my story. I have more ideas, but haven't gotten things written down yet. It's "the guitar player and me." It's (of course!) A brian May story. I had my BF read it. He said " it's good." Not so helpful. I want to know - What did you like? Not like? What should I change? I am returning to writing after literally 30 years of writer's block. I thought fan fiction would be an easy way to transition back into it. Nope! Still hard. Same inequities. Won't you please PLEASE help me?!
(Kudos if you know the film the last sentence is said in!)
