Cherry

So painful that I wanted to cry.

Hi!  Just want  to share my new story.  Hope you find time to check it out vote and share. Maybe we can give feedbacks on each others works too. :)) You can also follow me and rest assured I'll follow you back. Sana magustuhan nyo. Happy reading! 
          
          It was said that the Yamaguchi-gumi is the strongest and biggest yakuza clan there is. And in that big family of yakuza,  there was a beautiful growing dragon. Cold and heartless. Fearless and strongest. And the youngest chosen one. 
          
          At ako yun. 
          
          I killed my people and ran away to maintain a lie. Pero ang totoong dahilan ay umalis ako because I have to protect someone. And I'm sick of the killings and how my life works. Gusto kong maging isang ordinaryong tao. 
          
          For once, i can be ordinary.. 
          
          Ginawa ko ang lahat para umiwas sa dati kong buhay. I only got few rules in my new life. 
          1- Survive. 
          2- Avoid distractions. 
          3- Keep myself away from the rich. 
          4- Don't stand out. 
          
          I know these doesn't  even make sense to others but it does to me. 
          
          I've been doing a great job keeping a low profile as a humble employee of a 24/7 convenience store..... Until Cole Carlyle, the thug business man, saw the ascending dragon tattoo on my back. Is he just a typical deliquent or something bigger than what he seems to be? 
          
          And as if Cole wasn't enough para guluhin ang pagbabagong buhay ko.....
          
          Kai Yanagi, the half Italian-Japanese devil-may-care had to show up in my face. Ang karibal ko sa posisyon bilang leader ng yakuza clan. I already gave up my position as an heir to the clan. What does he want from me this time? 
          
          
          
          Im fcked. This is not part of the plan.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/174458385-lady-yakuza-boss

Hello I am the judge for Starship Awards 2019, Romance Category and this is my comments about your story. You removed your story kaya dito ko na lang inilagay ang comment for your story. First of all, I like the plot you choose. Yung exploration mo which is kung saan mo din kami gustong ihatid is wonderful. I thought na it is only focus on romance between the 2 characters but I am glad that even though the protagonist is in denial about her gender pinili mo pa ding ipursue yung about sa gender niya which is good, nakakakita kami ng mas wide na point of view. But the problem is the style and deliveration. The writer must 2 pages step ahead before the readers but I can predict what will happen next about the chapters which is I suggest that you should improve more together with your characters. Overall, the start of your story is catchy and I hope you can improve more about writings. Goodluck and have a blessed week.

Happy Birthday sa'kin haha!

And I love your story

Whoa, so your a fan of one punch man?!!

Ahh..keep it up.gumawa ka pa ng bagong story.wala na akong ibang masabi.ipagpatuloy mo lang talaga yung pagiging editor at writer mo,.

Waaah! Ikaw po pala yung author na hinahanap ko. Ang ganda po talaga ng fruit of lies! Actually. Nakita ko na 'yon dati sa newsfeed ko at nakuha ang atensyon ko kaso biglang nawala at hindi ko naksearch. Sana po matapos n'yo po abg fruit of lies. Waaah! Ang ganda po talaga non (kahit chapter 1 palang nababasa ko) tsaka miss a, kahit hindi ko pa po natatapos yun, alam kong deserve mo na ng maraming readers. Magaling ka kasing gumawa ng kwento na kahit sa umpisa pa lang ay nakuha na ng atensyon ko ang kwento mo.

Hi I love your stories can’t wait na mabasa ko ❤️

Ohayou! Narealize ko lang nitong mga nakaraang araw na writer nga pala ako at responsibilidad ng isang writer ang mag-update lagi. What I did last week was totally wrong! Kaya hayan, ipinublish ko na ulit ang mga gawa ko. Edited na.
          
          Anyway highway, para sa mga katulad kong writers, 2019 na kaya keep fighting para sa atin. Este keep writing. Good luck sa ating lahat!