cheesedanish777

hello, my name is brie and it's lovely to meet you. (: 
          i was just wondering if you could perhaps take a look at one of my stories? 
          i would greatly appreciate any feedback and would happily return the favour. 
          
          i was also wondering which one you think i should continue? i have four stories and it's getting a bit much continuing them all, you know? so if you have a particular favorite, it would be brilliant if you could help me out. :D 
          
          ▪ Carpe Diem 
          Ambrose is a Goddess, and Zeus' daughter. To help with her Goddess training, she had chosen to live among her people for a couple of weeks, or months at the most, but being a normal teenager is harder than she thought it would be; trouble is brewing beneath the Earth crust and Ambrose is in the middle of a war and remains to be the easy target. 
          
          ▪ The Revolution 
          Vampires are just a myth - right? Wrong. Ever since Edens sister has gone missing, her life has turned upside down, but will she survive when a legion of vampires threaten to destrong the human race? 
          
          ▪ Change of Fate 
          Maya and Eva are normal teeangers, or so they thought - they are half angel. A prophet has told that all three worlds - the realm of the living, hell and heaven - will be destroyed because of the neverending war between heaven and hell, but he has also predicted it is maya and eva that are the key to survival, but will they beat hells army? (made it to #11 on whats hot list) 
          
          ▪ Bitter Salvation 
          James, Emmeline, Sienna, Harry and Noelle are brothers and sisters with a dark secret; they are vampires, of sorts. In need to survive, they must drain humans of their life force, but these teeenagers respect life - they do not want to be monsters. They leave their home in order of a better life, but when their evil mother comes to drag them back, will everyone be safe?

I know these things are annoying, but could you please read my story. Only if you want to though. I don’t want to sound pushy. And if you feel like it, you could vote or comment, or even fan. And even if you don’t read it that’s ok I understand. 
          
          The Felidae Saga: The Mark Of The Tiger Book 1 
          
          SUMMARY 
          
          Raimelle Love was a kind and sweet person until her best friend dies in front of her eyes. Now she has a mark on her chest that can’t be explained and her parents are sending her to boarding school to help her learn to forget her friend’s death. But the only thing she learns is her teacher, Mr. Stone, is not whom he seems. Raimelle soon finds herself in a dream, were she follows him into a new world. A world of Magic. Raimelle finds herself learning. Learning about her mark, about the mysterious Mr. Stone, and about what darkness lies ahead. But most importantly she learns to LOVE. But will that Love SAVE her? Or KILL her?

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