chefnialler

What if I wrote an explicate scene in this next chapter of Dolly? hmmmm...

wowuroriginal

so basically you stole a whole plot of a famous and renown novelist and tweaked it a bit? google The Outsiders by S.E. Hinton

chefnialler

@wowuroriginal I have read the outsiders. I have seen the movie and I made sure not to take the plot? 
            
            In The Outsiders, Ponyboy and Johnny  have to leave town because Johnny killed a soc. In my story, Greaser, Niall and Mary leave town with his little brother Tony because he wants Mary and Tony to have a better life. 
            
            Mary's father is a killer, abusive and controlling. Nialls father is abusive also and that makes him protective over Mary. In The Outsiders, Ponyboy doesn't have parents, they died in an accident.  NO WHERE IN THE OUTSIDERS DOES PONYBOY TAKE A GIRL UNDER HIS WING EITHER. 
            
            The only thingd similar thing in my fanfic, Greaser and The Outsiders is the fact that Niall is a Greaser who takes care of his brother (because his father is abusive) and Mary is a rich kid from the other side of town.
            
            Please, read my fanfic before you assume that I ripped off a famous book. x
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chefnialler

@greasergirl16 Thank you very much x
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chefnialler

Hi! So it's been a while and I'm sorry!! It's been kind of busy here at my home with graduation coming up and getting my school work done on time to make sure I DO graduate aha.  I'm planning to update Dolly shortly after school ends (June 3rd for me). Thank you for not hounding me too much to update xxx