SierraCBelle2
Thanks for following me! I read the first chapter of your book - sounds like it could be an interesting story! Liked your map too! Here is a tip (well, I think it's a tip anyway): If I was you, I might re-format so you have more short paragraphs. Break up the long pieces. Every time someone speaks, that's a new paragraph...take a look at the formatting on one of my books. Just a thought!
cher1917
Thank you so much! I totally forgot I had this posted lol. I’ve made a ton of changes since then, but I’ve been focused on planning for the past few months. This was the first thing I ever wrote so a lot has improved, but thank you for the kind words!