cherry_veilx

this is a continuing issue i have with writing the greatest, i have no idea where to start, i would love to write pre-war and cassie's dynamics with the family before the war, including her mother, but i also want to start writinf isaiah and cassie aswell, i'm just so conflicted!!!

cherry_veilx

@-shelbysecret- yessss i may thank youu x
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-shelbysecret-

@cherry_veilx or make a mini first act be multiple chapters set during the war, then the next act set after the war 
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-shelbysecret-

@cherry_veilx you could make a long prologue that takes place during the prewar time, then the first official chapter takes place after the war 
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cherry_veilx

this is a continuing issue i have with writing the greatest, i have no idea where to start, i would love to write pre-war and cassie's dynamics with the family before the war, including her mother, but i also want to start writinf isaiah and cassie aswell, i'm just so conflicted!!!

cherry_veilx

@-shelbysecret- yessss i may thank youu x
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-shelbysecret-

@cherry_veilx or make a mini first act be multiple chapters set during the war, then the next act set after the war 
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-shelbysecret-

@cherry_veilx you could make a long prologue that takes place during the prewar time, then the first official chapter takes place after the war 
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cherry_veilx

i really want to use rain spencer as a face claim for someone

cherry_veilx

@-shelbysecret- yes this is what i was thinking 
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-shelbysecret-

@cherry_veilx i feel like her in TSIP could 100% be used in OBX or anything of a similar vibe 
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cherry_veilx

@Bellefanfix she's so pretty and i love her but most of the fics i write or am writing are set in like 1920s or got ones and i can't use her in them. i need her in a period drama so bad.
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cherry_veilx

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Right, so today was my friend's and my birthday picnic, and there's a girl in our friend group who we don't necessarily like because of some of the things she says (I'm gonna name her E) so she says something about womans football which was quite sexist towards women, so me and 3 (P, A and O and there's nine aof us all together) of my other friends go to the toilet and we get a message from O's bf and we go to the field he's at to see him, 5 mins later we get a call from the E calling the gc and A answers and says hello, E doesn't hear us and starts talking shit abt us on the phone and says that the rest of them should run away, but none of the others agree, E notices that she is on call and goes oh shit and hangs up, we go back to the picnic and its very awkward and we can feel the tension, I message the others and go nothing is about you we are js upset with E. Later, when we are walking home, O messages E saying that she didn't think what E said was right earlier, and E replies with ok what does that have to do with me (Someone's been watching too much Euphoria, chill it, Cassie Howard). I honestly don't know what to do because I only have a yr left of school and I'll probs cut ties after, but I've tried to be civil and nice, but I cannot do it anymore. She talks shit about everyone in the fg to each other behind our backs and isn't a very nice person at all. If anyone has any advice, please help.

cherry_veilx

@ncolefics yess i totally agree, the thing is tho one of my friends that is in the fg will take her side, and her best friend doesn't like her that much will take that friends side it'll split the group apart, she's also had like 7 fg the entire skl yr and she wasn't in for half of yr 7 and all of yr 8.
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cherry_veilx

@ncolefics yeah i just think that they are out of order, their trying to avoid conflict but it's js causing more conflict
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ncolefics

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@ cherry_veilx  well sadly in those cases you have to make sacrifices for your own peace. After the stunt that girl pulled with talking shit about you all, no one should be defending her, but oh well 
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cherry_veilx

I was wondering, do people enjoy reading fics that follow the same plot as the series or movie, but make up their own dialogue for their scenes, or do they prefer it when you follow the script? I'm in the middle of rewriting a Tommy fic, and I've kept the plot the same but made the scenes my own, if that makes sense.

cherry_veilx

@CassandraofTroyy yes like theres some scenes when its not necessary as such but acceptable to do so but i prefer like a kind of side plot which it the books main plot if that makes sense
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CassandraofTroyy

@cherry_veilx  Personally, I don’t mind if the fanfic follows the plot as long as the author adds a touch of originality. However, what I find a bit disappointing is when the OC steals a character’s lines. For example, I’ve read quite a few fanfics where the OC says the same things as Grace 
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cherry_veilx

@ncolefics yess i like when they change it up abit
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cherry_veilx

I want to write an Alysanne Blackwood fic so bad, I have an idea in mind, but it's very cliché. Elaena Targaryen is Rhaenyra and Daemon's daughter (she's older than Jace); she is much like Visenya Targaryen. Should I make my own dragon up for her, or should she claim The Cannibal (I know, very cliché). Her face claim will either be Freya Allan or Katherine Winnick.

cherry_veilx

sooo i've just found an old thomas shelby fic i wrote around a year and a half ago and it's based off of the labyrinth ( i dunno if anyone else has watched it ) but it was my favourite a a child, and david bowie is absolutely amazing in it. 

-shelbysecret-

@cherry_veilx if you need help choosing a faceclaim feel free to message me on tiktok i would love to help!!!!
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cherry_veilx

i don't know if i should publish it or not, but first of all i need to find a face claim for my oc.
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cherry_veilx

i hate writing music by men, my poor evelina why did i do this to you.

cherry_veilx

@CassandraofTroyy i'll pay for ur therapy don't worry !!!
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CassandraofTroyy

@cherry_veilx  what do you mean... It shouldn't get worse, poor girl
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cherry_veilx

This is just my opinion and I don't mean to offend anyone with it but I feel like writing fanfics about real life people like actors and singers is just a bit weird, again this is my opinion and I'm not trying to bash you if you do this, but like that's a real person and I will admit I have read a few about my celeb crushes but I've never fully completed them because I just get a bit weirded out by them.

cherry_veilx

@CassandraofTroyy yes this is exactly how i feel
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CassandraofTroyy

@cherry_veilx  I couldn’t agree with you more! I obviously don’t mind fanfiction about one of the characters the actor has played because it’s fictional – it isn’t real. But when it comes to the actor himself, I see it as a bit of an invasion of his privacy, of his personal life, if you know what I mean
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ncolefics

@cherry_veilx yeah i get it, i also don't judge anyone for it, everything is for people, it's just my personal preference too
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