@cherryboom Hi there baby'O. Just finished reading your own story. It was great naman, nakakatawa, na-e-excite lang ako kung paano mo mabibigyan nang meaning yung title na SWEET GOODBYE. Kaya, I'm looking forward to it. Advice ko? Hmm. Yung SPACING, tapos minimize mo siguro yung pag ka capslock mo. haha. Tapos ano pa ba.. Yun lang siguro? Anyways, ganyan talaga yan pag first time. Magbasa-basa ka nalang ng article about writing a story parea mas madagdagan yung kaalaman mo. ♥