the_lost_pages

Hello everyone!
          First of all I apologise for posting this here without permission. 
          I'm a beginner. Currently I'm writing my first book 
          'Beneath His Empire ' so kindly do check this out and give me feedback. I'd try my best to not disappoint you guys. 
          Thanks. 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/393538879?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Daffodilnewbeginning

seraphinetales

Hello, author i respect your works and your talent and i apologise for Posting this here...if it seems not good then you can delete this...
          
          Guys, if you could check my book out and tell me if it's good and if I should continue...thank you!!! Please do check it out and let me know...
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/388298983?utm _source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content =share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=jayy
          
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