𝒓𝒆𝒆𝒗𝒊𝒔𝒉𝒂

Hello ppl!
          
          So, uh, a little surpruse of sorts....
          
          I fucked up the storyline of Cherry Wine badly. Like so bad, I don't even wanna keep it up, but hey, I mean, Season 4 was kinda good. 
          
          Anyways so initially, Maddison Brown was supposed to be Michelle Hargrove, a girl with powers like El and a presumed dead brother (Ollie), but I improvised it to Maddison Brown with her Best friend Ollie who is partially trapped in her head. 
          
          Now, Maddie was supposed to die by Vecna. 
          
          This was before I watched Season 5, when I fid watch it, I thought I should maybe try to adjust her in (the completely disappointing season, wdym the fights was barely 30 mins?). 
          
          But when I read it myself I was like why the fuck did I drop random plot points in the middle of nowhere? 
          
          So basically, I'm gonna edit it and stick to the original storyline, that is, Maddison dying. (Dw there is another Steve Harrington story from S2-S5 in progress). 
          
          The reason for doing this was basically exploring how well I could write grief, because in all the Steve fanfics ive read, the mc never dies (ik shes not supposed to, but hey be open to change).
          
          Pls don't kill me for killing Maddie btw.....

Hello ppl!
          
          So, uh, a little surpruse of sorts....
          
          I fucked up the storyline of Cherry Wine badly. Like so bad, I don't even wanna keep it up, but hey, I mean, Season 4 was kinda good. 
          
          Anyways so initially, Maddison Brown was supposed to be Michelle Hargrove, a girl with powers like El and a presumed dead brother (Ollie), but I improvised it to Maddison Brown with her Best friend Ollie who is partially trapped in her head. 
          
          Now, Maddie was supposed to die by Vecna. 
          
          This was before I watched Season 5, when I fid watch it, I thought I should maybe try to adjust her in (the completely disappointing season, wdym the fights was barely 30 mins?). 
          
          But when I read it myself I was like why the fuck did I drop random plot points in the middle of nowhere? 
          
          So basically, I'm gonna edit it and stick to the original storyline, that is, Maddison dying. (Dw there is another Steve Harrington story from S2-S5 in progress). 
          
          The reason for doing this was basically exploring how well I could write grief, because in all the Steve fanfics ive read, the mc never dies (ik shes not supposed to, but hey be open to change).
          
          Pls don't kill me for killing Maddie btw.....

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