under_the_stars232

Hey, I was wondering if you could read my new dystopian book World Left in Pieces. It’s my very first book and I want to improve. Comments and votes and shares would be appreciated. I’m looking for someone that could give me constructive criticism. Thank you so much for your time. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/327826633?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=library&wp_uname=under_the_stars232&wp_originator=NIlGA9aTFhHESJ6OnskzIJBlKGczabbZ4kaORp71rqYZ%2FMSlgy51xSqjbG1xyGeroeMyhp7fU3Ef%2BIp6JaI1z4F051OAwsc6f64%2F5EGv7S404aUGNltvS6%2FI%2FFxD7K6H

cherylniki

WhiteGoldFangs

Hi! 
          
          Thank you for adding The Prince's Choice to your reading list! It means a lot! ❤
          
          I hope you'll like it if you decide to give it a try! :) 
          
          All the best, 
          
          Jenny

cherylniki

@WhiteGoldFangs hey yeah I'm currently reading it and the writing is amazing❤ you have done a great job
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Trina_K

Thanks for voting on "Guns and Roses!" ❤

cherylniki

@Trina_K your most welcome♡ enjoying the story:) keep it up
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