Phoebe_Jackson

So...what do you think about the story so far??
          I think that the third chapter is quite boring and there is way too less description. But, I guarantee you that the story'll get much better.
          By the way, I need help. 
          You see, this story takes place after they defeat Gaia. So, Leo has to be going back to Ogygia. How should I be showing that? Plus you know that they are on their way for a certain quest which I won't reveal now.
          Please Help.