cheyxmac

Hey @user37377578 ! I got the first chapter re written to be more accurate. If there are any critics or improvements to be made I would greatly appreciate it!

user37377578

@SocialMilkshakes I saw that, it looks good, I don't really have anything to critique, everything makes sense and works well, but I am not exactly a professional critic, so maybe others could find something to change, because I haven't.
          	  
          	  Also, did you change the prologue a little too, or am I just crazy, because it says Corinna bumped into Kratos, but I though it was Atreus at first which is why I wrote the comment talking about how Atreus knew who she was, either I was more tired than I thought when I read that chapter and mixed things up, or you tweaked it slightly.
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cheyxmac

Hey @user37377578 ! I got the first chapter re written to be more accurate. If there are any critics or improvements to be made I would greatly appreciate it!

user37377578

@SocialMilkshakes I saw that, it looks good, I don't really have anything to critique, everything makes sense and works well, but I am not exactly a professional critic, so maybe others could find something to change, because I haven't.
            
            Also, did you change the prologue a little too, or am I just crazy, because it says Corinna bumped into Kratos, but I though it was Atreus at first which is why I wrote the comment talking about how Atreus knew who she was, either I was more tired than I thought when I read that chapter and mixed things up, or you tweaked it slightly.
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