@chiara_ma
The elephant has got news! Flying over the rooftops she was struck by inspiration for a whole new cover... this time, focus is on the arabesque Cindy has had to hold in order to keep up her lie, and on that dance on the edge of time that started it all... Let me know what you think of it!
Link is as always https://www.wattpad.com/story/187860957
Oh and a new chapter is out, of course...
Something is off. Isn't that what September always feels like? It has the magic of new beginnings as much as the taste of the autumn, when everything changes but nothing new can grow. It is the very feeling I associate with my Cinderella: the presence of an absence. Cindy Reils' character is always after something, something you can't quite put your finger on. Sometimes I wonder, can she?
I am publishing a new chapter today, hoping that the oddness of September will bring you closer to her... or maybe not ;) Enjoy!
https://www.wattpadwriters.com/t/write-a-poem-on-the-spot-creativity-challenge/114313/91
Write a poem on the spot! - Creativity challenge -
I just opened a new topic on the Wattpad Community... it's turning out to be even funnier than I thought! And I realized it may help just about anybody improve their writing... as it's helping me!
If you want to have a look: https://www.wattpadwriters.com/t/write-a-poem-on-the-spot-creativity-challenge/114313/91
Thank you for adding my story to your reading list:)
Get ready to dance!
Third chapter now online, staging in the head of Cinderella during the ball that changed her life.
Memories are tricky things: the closer you get to grasp them, the less you can see where lies are lurking...
https://www.wattpad.com/story/187860957
Hi chiara_ma!
My friend here, HarpyGuardian, recommend me to read your book "Bright we burn". I love the way you introduce a clever twist, merging different timelines into one stoyline. It was a sci fi genre that i didn't expect at first. I am glad that we meet another writer and we are hoping to exchange ideas and communications with one another.
PS. Do you have an idea of a venusian day compared to an earth day? Anyway, nice meeting you!
-audiber
@audiber Hi! I am so glad you liked my story! And I think I will try to get inspiration from your characters for my next chapter: I've only started your story and I already like them ;) I like how colorful your world looks, with so many "coups de théatre!" PS: I mostly wonder what it might be like to live under such a thick atmosphere as the one on Venus... I mean do you think it gives things a different color due to a different range of electromagnetic waves being able to pass through the atmosphere? How do you think the sky would look from there? It was great meeting you, hope to hear from you soon!
Hi Chiara! Thank you for adding "Shnyzel and the World of Gaia"to your reading list. I hope you will like and enjoy it!
@HarpyGuardian well, aparently you spoiled some of it to me x.x and we are in the conversation section so I don't think it's a secret anymore x.x .But anyways, I am also glad you had a good time with my story!
@HarpyGuardian Hahaha I am so happy you liked it! I feel bad for the poor prince too, but don't worry he will sooo not stay there waiting for his princess to come back -- actually, can you keep a secret? The truth is I imagined this story as his own, although he is a "secret" main character... I guess you could say he is my own deus ex machina! In the meantime I continued your story (aargh I wish I had more time to advance faster through the chapters) and I can't wait to know more about Shnyzel memories... bref I will give you more useful feedback when I get to your latest chapter :))
@chiara_ma Hello again! Hehe, I just recently finished reading the first part and is good! You're using a character that is already known and that gives me a good and clear picture of what each scenery looks like. Especially that moment when cinderella running away from the palace *cough* poor prince xD. Anyways it's good because yours is scifi, I mean you got me curious to how did she lose it. Unlike mine that I think would probably ending up using too much "deus ex machina" *facepalmed myself while slowly shaking my head*. Sighing... Anyways, again, I am a newbie myself so not really good with reading x.x
First chapter of my story published! Will you dare enter the doors of the Memory Bureau? https://www.wattpad.com/story/187860957