chiburple

Blood in the Fire is free to download on kindle today and tomorrow (May 8 - May 9).  Get your copy while you can :) 
          
          http://www.amazon.com/Blood-Timelaws-Trilogy-Marise-Ghorayeb-ebook/dp/B00W343PQW

My third book, Blood in the Fire, just went live on Amazon today. In celebration, I've posted the first six chapters here on Wattpad. If I get enough encouragement I may post more ;)

I love your first chapter of your story, 'Blood in the Fire'! It is awesome and has me wanting more! I can't wait to read the rest!

How are you? Would you care to review my new book, Tampered?

@chiburple Hey, could you check out my story? I havent gotten very far yet, but it's called Rebels....Its based in the future....and ya....Thanks:)

Thanks for checking my story out. Yours sound pretty interesting too. I shall add it to my reading list! x3

thank you for fanning me! It is so cold here!
          

@JaneSilver16 
          
          I read your first chapter. Very original idea so well done! Made me think a little of inception with the concept. 
          
          I should warn you though that I'm on a bit of an anti-adverb crusade. May I suggest you remove the following words to make your sentances stronger: finally, vigorously, probably, miserably, logically, actually (in actually killed and in actually make it stop), seemingly, simply, suddenly. 
          
          And of course, I would love it if you would take a peek at "History of the Timelaws" if you haven't already :) 

@chiburple Could you please check out my story? It's called "Living in Reality's Dream", and it is a paranormal/action/adventure/romance/science fiction story. I would love it if you could give me some feedback. :)
          Thank you.

Its sounds you are a great writer... hehe