nizzvb
You said part where mixed up can you point out them ? So that I'll look at it..
nizzvb
@chikichuchas and thanku for reminding me to correct it as Maya lol my keyboard is just like that I can't help it
nizzvb
@nizzvb no siso haha I'm so glad that you did pointed my mistake as this thing is genuinely so nice of you at least I'll improve myself for the better don't be sorry just mention that particular part or describe it in few so I'll look on it to correct
chikichuchas
@nizzvb hey seems like deleted chapter 4. But I did point out errors in earlier chapters. Sorry I didn't mean to point out your mistakes but the the story is genuinely nice so I could not stop myself from pointing out the mistakes.
