child of chaos

Thanks for adding the hunters of the sun to your reading list!

Hey

Hawk. I think that the beginning is good, but you should edit it a little. Spend a bit on puncuation, spelling, phrasing, extending plot, etc. Trust me. If you do a bit for each on ur parts, it will totally transform!

Hey there
          
          Thanks so much for the follow... I really appreciate the support...
          
          As well as thanks for adding my books to your reading list... I really hope you enjoy reading them... And tell me what you think...
          
          Mystery 

I will follow you because you sound like a fun person