@Auraematic Hey! This is almost 2 years late, but WOW this comment made me so happy!!! Thank you so much for saying that you like my style, that really warmed my heart. I always wanted to be a writer who describes things vividly so people can really relate to the characters. Thanks so much, Simon!
Also, when I wrote this story, I barely knew how to speak English. It isn't my first langage. So, don't apologize for your English! I think you sound perfect :) Never give up!