chiont

See you when the next one finds me. : )

Azel247

hoy author bat ganun yung kay Chevy and Elise sakit ha but anyway ganun tlaga buhay may mga bagay na dapat isakripisyo but it's hard to live like that, will she be happy kaya kse she's just living nalang but she's not herself like the end of the line nung epilogue she's mourning her love for Chevy then she's married diba parang unfair how can people just live with it. attorney nman sya so annulment or divorce nalang cla hahah chariz. ah basta maganda stories nyo keep writing aabangan next story mo.

chiont

Tapos na ang story ni Chevy.
          
          Honestly, hindi ko pa rin alam paano ako magpapaalam nang maayos sa kuwentong ito kasi ang bigat-bigat niyang dalhin, pero eto na nga. After all the chaos, longing, bad choices, soft moments, and heartbreak, natapos ko rin siya.
          
          Maraming salamat sa lahat ng nagbasa, naghintay, nasaktan, nagalit, at nanatili hanggang dulo. Thank you for loving Chevy, even when she was too much. Thank you for understanding Elise, even when she was hard to forgive. Salamat sa pagdamay sa kuwentong ito from start to finish.
          
          Hindi ito madaling kuwento, at lalong hindi ito madaling tapusin. Pero sobrang mahal ko ang story na ‘to, at mas mahal ko kayong lahat na sumabay sa akin habang sinusulat ko ito.
          
          For now, goodbye muna kay Chevy. Tapos na ang kuwento niya.
          
          And yes, I’ll be back. Hindi pa ngayon, at baka matagal pa. But for now, let this ending stay with us first.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/395262356

old_soul

Just finished reading In Between Takes. So nabasa ko na lahat ng finished works mo. You have quite a way with words. Iba ang hagod ng pagkakalapag tsaka pagkakatagpi-tagpi at pagkakatahi mo ng mga salita. Minsan swabe lang, minsan nanunuya. They hit kahit masaya naman ako sa buhay ko. Di ko din alam bakit. Or maybe because your characters were that relatable. Not because naka-relate ako sa pagiging artista, doctor, engineer, pilot nila, i'm none of the above (fortunately, cause, you know, all sound so stressful). But because they feel so real... and human. Funny. Flawed. Messy. Confusing. Chaotic. Vulnerable. Real. Human. So real, that Vivi reminds me so much of one of my friends. Yung sobrang kalat sa loob pero 'very put together' ang curated aesthetic for the world to behold. If there's any critique I have, be careful lang sometimes with some of your characters and their personalities kasi there were moments they were all blurring and becoming one person that I was quite confused who was talking. Nonetheless, thank you for sharing your works. I very much enjoyed all of 'em. You obviously have the talent and skill for it so I hope you continue writing. Pasensya na masyadong mahaba, it's 1 am so I'm overflowing with thoughts and words and I have nowhere to dump them atm, so here we are :)

chiont

@old_soul Grabe, thank you. This means a lot, especially coming from someone who really read everything. I’m glad the writing hit you that way. Hindi man sa careers nila, pero sa pagiging messy, chaotic, human. That’s really the point. Also, noted sa critique mo about the voices. I’ll take note of that, and I’ll work on making each character more distinct. And don’t worry sa haba ng message mo, I appreciate messages like this. Thank you for taking the time, and for staying with my stories. I’ll keep writing. : )
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chiont

Finishing my third story is an achievement I don’t take lightly.
          
          I’m genuinely proud that I was able to complete In Between Takes… every chapter, every scene, every emotion poured into it.
          
          Kitakits next week. Sana ready na kayo for what’s coming next.
          
          It’s time for Chevy and Elise’s story. ❤️
          https://www.wattpad.com/1616311386?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=chiont