hjyi04

Hi! I have particular R4R style but it's totally up to you because I'm not sure how well received my comments would be. I kind of list my comments throughout the chapter with both critiques (but you can definitely take it however you will because it's your story) and compliments. If you don't want the critique's then you can let me know and I'll delete them. Thanks!

chl0viss

I’d do a read for read w you for sure! I would definitely like some feedback. I’m down for critiques but just go a little easy on me haha… this just started for fun then I really enjoyed it so I posted it. Is my short story your style tho?
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