Chloe Kohlman

I'd love some honest overall (and critical) feedback on my story so far! I'll happily return the favour if you pm me :)

I just published Chapter Five! I hope you like it!

Chapter Four is up! Let me know what you think!

Okay, I know I said I was done editing the first few chapters but I lied lol. I decided I like the longer chapters so I meshed all 5 into 3. I swear I'm done now hahah and the next chapter will be posted tomorrow!

Okay I think I’m officially done editing the first 5 chapters lol at least until the book is done! 

I just wrote my first ~spicy~ scene hahaha let me know what you think about Chapter Five!

The next chapter will be up tomorrow  hope you guys like it ! 

I condensed the first three chapters of my book into two, adding in a few extra details so I can get right into the action in the third chapter! I'd love it if you could give them a read and tell me what you think!