GoldGamezALot
@chocofrogo new wandwork chapter out and i sorta don't like it
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GoldGamezALot
@chocofrogo Wandwork is going really well; thank you for your advice!
GoldGamezALot
@chocofrogo thank you! I sorta branched out on the new chapter; its me talking to the reader instead of displaying the story.
GoldGamezALot
Thank you for helping me out on feedback for Wandwork! While writing it I tried my hardest to make sure no character was overpowered, as a lot of Harry Potter OC’s are overpowered and practically perfect in every way. So, if you find something in the characters that seems out of balance or overpowered, please tell me.
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Hiya! Pls if anyone needs someone to talk to or just a friend talk to me! I would love to have conversations with you guys.
GoldGamezALot
@chocofrogo It would mean a lot to me if you could offer some constructive criticism on my book Wandwork, as I need to make it better. Thanks!