chocolate_chip13

Happy thanksgiving

chocolate_chip13

Hi guys...
          My Pepa he was my great great grandfather like my father he basically raised me...passed away yestserday. The day I planned on coming back to wattpad. Please be with me and my family through prayers and give me some time to heal. I'll be back soon. 
          
          Thanks,
          Choco

ThoughtsOnFire

Hey!
          
          I was just getting into fox stories last year when my old account got hacked. But when I made this one I found your fox story and loved it!
          
          Um there is a little work needed. Maybe put just a little more effort into it (not to make that sound rude and all the chapters could be more developed ) but I love the characters and their personalities. Also some editing is needed with grammar. It isn't that bad but it is slightly needed. Besides that your story is great!
          
          Thank you so much!

chocolate_chip13

Thanks for your feedback! 
            I was planning on going back and doing some editing but it is quite hard to wright with my concussion. I am working on edits right now, that is why there are no updates actually. I will work harder on the story i promise! Thanks for checking me out and being so positive!
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chocolate_chip13

Hey guys!
          
          So we were rear ended yesterday night and I hit my head pretty hard
          
          I was fine but today during my first class I got a headache. 
          
          Well my dad took me to the hospital...I have had a concussion. 
          
          So...
          
          
          I can't post for a while sorry guys

chocolate_chip13

Hey!
          
          So I was brought into the world of werewolves...(thanks Caroline now I'm addicted) and so now I will be weighting yep a werewolf and a fox spirit story. 
          
          I am going to unpublish ALL the stories I have out cause even tho I redone them I STILL don't like them. 
          
          It should be out later tonight. 
          
          Thanks chips,
          
          Chocolate ❤️❤️❤️