chocolatelife7

Guys let me know about my story and give suggestions
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/261381865

chocolatelife7

Hi guys plz give feedback about my new story plzzz
          I just published "chapter 1" of my story "Darbadar". https://www.wattpad.com/1141090772?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=chocolatelife7&wp_originator=fXU3LZsy%2FuSuTABQwlE6SUJk6I%2BrLWMxPssTqqk1TmM%2FvcJkFWDTNA6UHQxAJyd5MH29esTNr7OgmMdcFFA7KInNNLEAG0CyRNOBKye0ignoo%2BxkedVByRn9mK7XJ%2FC7