CripplingWinds
Gonna just post this little review here because I can.
Your work is okay but I really recommend better explanation of your “Strings” universe, like how the MC doesn’t just assume that the red one is the red one because he probably has other strings on his other wrists, and also give him an excuse for his color blindness because in real life, it doesn’t work like that.
I’ll give ur profile probably 4.5/10 just because I haven’t seen much from you but I do see potential.
chocolateychips300
@CripplingWinds ok. I will do my best to give a better explanation of the universe and i will attempt to figure out something to explain his color blindness. Also not to sound rude or anything but how many arms do ya think he has? Other arms??? Lmao