choolwemwenda

Hi everyone, I know it's been a really long time since I posted something. For that I am sorry.
          	I have been working on something that I finished not so long ago. I tried editing it myself and it was hard so I tried looking for an editor. That didn't go too well, but I think my latest piece is okay.
          	I know it has a few errors in it but do read it, it's actually pretty good.
          	It's about something that caught my attention, something that I myself have gone through that people don't give enough attention.
          	I wrote this in hopes that it would motivate and help someone going through something hard.
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/267508959

choolwemwenda

Hi everyone, I know it's been a really long time since I posted something. For that I am sorry.
          I have been working on something that I finished not so long ago. I tried editing it myself and it was hard so I tried looking for an editor. That didn't go too well, but I think my latest piece is okay.
          I know it has a few errors in it but do read it, it's actually pretty good.
          It's about something that caught my attention, something that I myself have gone through that people don't give enough attention.
          I wrote this in hopes that it would motivate and help someone going through something hard.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/267508959

choolwemwenda

Hello everyone, I'm back and I will try to give you a few new chapters.
          
          But first I want to do some proof reading and editing just to make sure everything is okay. There maybe some changes made to some of the chapters but I will keep the them of my story.
          
          One of the changes will be in chapter 1, James will be altered a little bit but there won't be too huge a difference I promise.
          
          I would really appreciate it if you could share my work and give a meaningful comment.
          
          Also some good news, I've been approached by someone who likes what I have written so far and would like to post it on a pay to read site. Tell me what you think about that

choolwemwenda

Good evening everyone. I have some sad news for all my followers. (The 4 of you whom I love so much lol) 
          
          For the next few months I will not be able to update my book because I will be studying. But as soon as I am done I will be back to all of you and promise to give you a great new chapter.
          
          But while I am gone I would like to ask that you share the work I have done so far with others and leave a critique which I will see and reply to as soon as I get back. You can be as harsh as you need to be because your critiques will help improve my writing.
          
          Even though I will be away, know that I love you all and wish you all the best in your own projects and lives.
          
          Until we meet again stay safe and stay creative.

choolwemwenda

At long last I have finished the fourth chapter of defending paradise. I sincerely apologise for the delayed completion. It has been a difficult chapter to write because it hasn't really included any of my favorite characters. But it had to be included in order to show everyone where James came from. I hope you enjoy it. J tried to keep it a little interesting. The next chapter will be out soon too so keep watching.