Hi...I already both of the links you gave me... :D
both are Interesting, but it's getting boring. Maganda sana ang romance Genre mo, pero, the usage of another Kpop talent as a character can be a little, bland now.
Try creating more original stuff...marami na akong nabasang mas amateur work kesa sa gawa mo and they are much better though.
Yung ibang lines naman, narinig narin sa iba yan. Try to be a little playful and read more as a tip of advice ok? Kunting edit lang para mas maganda. :D
and if you have time, can you like my page??
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