chris7110596

Watching something isn't always - seeing it, ears can see.

chris7110596

Where is Gods Gorilla - I just saw /- Godzilla minus ONE - scene stuff ups everywhere, dad runs into hospital room with toddler - ? Puts it on the floor then goes to mum —?!- baby should have been given to mum then the cuddle, noticed, all scenes that needed, realism got played with,?.

FilledWithRage

Hey, there. How it’s going?
          
          I know this might be weird since we haven’t formally met, and PMs are now closed, but would you mind giving me feedback on my book “legends” or super skilled me? If you’re not interested, it’s okay. If you are, would you mind letting me know if you see any errors and point them out please?
          
          Thanks
          
          - Rage

chris7110596

Love your profile and yes your writing is going places I'm new to it and found to go over its the key 
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chris7110596

Fungi rule decay nudging is good keep it up
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