chrisade_dee

Faded Dandelion Kabanata 17 - UPDATED
          	
          	"Shi...that's my name," kumbinsido kong sagot sa kanya.
          	
          	"Good. At least we got something," ani Rence.
          	
          	Umikot ang tingin ko sa paligid at agad iyong napansin ni Rence.
          	
          	"Nandito ka sa bahay ko. Diyan lang sa may baba 'yong ilog kung saan ka namin nakita. Medyo may kalakasan ang ulan. Punta tayo ng police station at ospital bukas?"
          	
          	Read here: https://www.wattpad.com/1606005218-cajara-sisters-2-faded-dandelions-kabanata-17/page/2

hayds80

Siguro sa pagiging MIA mo pag malapit nang matapos ang novel mo ay nakalimutan mo ang ibang scenes na naisulat mo na. Maganda lang sa simula pero pagkadating sa peak hanggang patapos papangit ang plot ng mga stories mo kahit sabihin mo pa na happy ending. Yah happy ending nga but kulang sa substance at may plot holes pa kasi siguro sa tagal mong mag update nakalimutan mo na ang ibang scenes na importante kaya mag match ang ibang scenes. Maganda sana ang grammar...

chrisade_dee

@hayds80 Hi! Thank you so much for appreciating my works. Just wanted to note that authors have a life outside of Wattpad naman po. I do understand na it's frustrating to keep on waiting for updates as I am a reader too. But it wouldn't hurt to be gentle with words with people.
            
            As you mentioned in your comments, this is indeed my story, I write to express my thoughts and not to impress people. I write when I am free, when I have the time to do it.
            
            I love writing, but sometimes, these types of comments isn't something that would push writers to write more, sometimes, it makes us feel less inspired.
            
            Thank you for your time!
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chrisade_dee

Faded Dandelion Kabanata 17 - UPDATED
          
          "Shi...that's my name," kumbinsido kong sagot sa kanya.
          
          "Good. At least we got something," ani Rence.
          
          Umikot ang tingin ko sa paligid at agad iyong napansin ni Rence.
          
          "Nandito ka sa bahay ko. Diyan lang sa may baba 'yong ilog kung saan ka namin nakita. Medyo may kalakasan ang ulan. Punta tayo ng police station at ospital bukas?"
          
          Read here: https://www.wattpad.com/1606005218-cajara-sisters-2-faded-dandelions-kabanata-17/page/2

chrisade_dee

Faded Dandelions Kabanata 10 - UPDATED
          "You're out of danger, but . . . we couldn't save the baby."
          
          Baby? What baby?
          
          I looked at Conny, but his face was just mirroring my shock. We didn't even know I was pregnant. The realization hit us both like a bomb.
          
          We had lost something we didn't even know we had.
          
          Read here: https://www.wattpad.com/1465432058-cajara-sisters-2-faded-dandelions-kabanata-10

chrisade_dee

Faded Dandelions Kabanata 9 - UPDATED
          Huminga ako nang malalim at muling inikot ang tingin sa kanyang sala nang matapos ako sa mga tawag na kailangang gawin. Every trace of her boytoy’s presence was meticulously erased—the stains, the fingerprints, the remnants of dr*gs.
          Nang silipin ko sa aking cellphone ang oras ay halos mag-a-alas kwatro na. Nang buksan namin kanyang bintana at nakumpirmang nalinis na ang lahat, ay doon pa lamang muling nakahinga ng maayos si Wrenashi.
          I watched how relief flooded her face at siniguro kong gamitin iyong instrumento para pakalmahin ang puso at isipan ko.
          I felt guilty, yes.
          But guilt can never make me turn my back to the people I love and care about.
          Read Here: https://www.wattpad.com/1463504873-cajara-sisters-2-faded-dandelions-kabanata-9

chrisade_dee

Faded Dandelion Kabanata 7 - UPDATED
          Si Conny lang ang nakakausap ko tungkol sa mga bagay na pilit kong tinatago sa pamilya at kaibigan ko. He knows almost everything about me. My secrets, the skeletons on my closet, just everything . . . at ngayong siya ang problema ko, sino ang kakausapin ko?
          
          I glanced at my phone, considering calling Conny back, but hesitated. What would I even say? How could I talk to him about . . . this?

chrisade_dee

Faded Dandelions Kabanata 6 UPDATED - https://www.wattpad.com/1457877616-cajara-sisters-2-faded-dandelions-kabanata-6
          “You’ve been acting so . . . weird these past few months,” I pointed out.
          
          A small smile appeared on the corners of his lips as his eyes focused even more with my every move.
          
          “Uhuh? And . . . you really don’t know why? You don’t have an idea on what’s happening to me . . . to us? Really, Akina?”

chrisade_dee

“I want you to stay still. Let me deal with the press and the people involved. ‘Wag na ‘wag kang magbibitiw ng statement about it unless I told you so. Are we clear on that?”
          
          “Yes,” Conny replied, his eyes never leaving her.
          
          “Good.” Kina sighed, the weight of their predicament pressing heavily on her shoulders. She turned to leave, but his grip on her arm stopped her.
          
          “Anything else?” kunot ang noong tanong ko.
          
          “Nothing . . . I’m really sorry for this,” aniya na.
          
          “I won’t say it’s okay, ‘cause it’s really not,” she replied, her determination hardening. “But we’ll fix this.”
          
          FADED DANDELIONS - KABANATA 5

chrisade_dee

Sorry for being inactive lately, super busy lang talaga with work, nandyan pa ba kayo? If yes, paramdam naman kayo!Kung mag-a-update ako, anong story ang gusto niyong unahin ko? Addicted? Faded Dandelions? or Almost Over? Comment down!

chrisade_dee

@ZCELiporada thank you! Will try to have a chapter uploaded within this week!
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