Elainthevalley

Hey I am Ela
           How you doing? 
          So I have written a book    " KIDNAPPED "
                                                          Its a dark book
           It's my new story!
          
           Its going to be evil! Dark ! 
          It will be filled with pain, abuse, violence, rape and what not
          
          ITS NOT A ROMANTIC STORY!!!
          
          But it is going to be my best work ever ! , The Ending,  the plot is worth the shot<3  I promise<333
          
          Anyways please check it it out And triggering content is present in it! So read it only if You think You can handle it! 
          That's all byee enjoy!!!!!
           
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/385477641?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Elainthevalley

christen_army

@Elainthevalley 
            Hi there, Ella. 
            
            i have tried to read it. And i started...  but there are some things, i just can't get my head around. But i am looking forward to read the whole thing. 
            
            I must say that this story is very well written. I mean, its read very well. But the logic in those chapters, at the very first few. The mall experience is just nonsence to me. And also her calmness and the electric shots logic was just off. But i would give it a chance, cause i see that you have talent for writting and its obvious. I have a problem, to write it down, that way, a reader can read it nice and it would sound good also. But i am incapable of doing so. 
            
            So as i said, i would finish it. And nice work. Just work on the logic of things. And how you would feel in certain situacion. If anything you can text me here and i would advise you if i would have the answer. 
            Elliana.
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