Hai author, overall "Mine" best, tak membosankan, mungkin percubaan yg pertama, tapi boleh improved, sis tak nak komen yg mencarut cuma sis harap author jangan cepat putus asa kalau kurang komen dr. Readers kalau mcm sya sendiri kadang-2 tuk chapters tak perlu komen pun ayat yg digunakan tu cantik, secara jujur bila author respond kenapa kurang komen Dr readers, sis rewind balik semua bab, I did found something earlier chapters tuk I thinks dr. Chapter 1 till 20 kut masih mcm a bit green sikit maksud sis setiap bab tuk ideas yg lahir dlm chapters mudah nak predict so it's makes reader will get bored tapi after a conflict nampak ada tarikan yg membuatkan sis sendiri eager to finish the chapters, and just now sis smpai the last chapter but hati blum puas lagi, I need more and I want author to update the next chapters, what is waiting for us as a reader, well author you did it's, you just doing great and the storyline getting more interesting, so please update soon.. I need more author..
